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Review Detail of Jok_Adams in Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant

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The MC here is cautious but this brain dead author always made his MC do some stupid decisions because of these sudden 'impulses'. For example, because of this sudden 'impulse', his cautious MC became brain dead, and as a mortal, he helped a fallen cultivator family that was even being eyed by cultivators. Why? Because this MC thought that a guy in that family is a 'close friend'. But the thing is, he said that they were close friends, but he did not even know the name of this 'close friend' of his. Like wtf author, you are a braindead trash. Garbage Chinese Author. Then there was another braindead thing here. The way the MC here used his cheat on a person because of another sudden 'impulse'. And because of that, when this person died, someone immediately knew that it was him and he has a secret. If not for the fact that this someone is a good person, then this MC will immediately be in danger. There was nothing wrong in taking revenge, but his way was just too stupid. Even a chicken could feel that the MC took something from it when the MC took its lifespan, so there is a big possibility that if he took a lifespan of a monk, that monk would feel it. But this MC as a mortal, still did it. Of course, because he is the MC, it wont be noticed by this monk even if its supposed to be noticed. Afterall, if even a normal chicken could feel that it lost something when the MC absorbed its lifespan, what about a monk right? Just for this stupid impulse, this author made a stupid plothole in his garbage novel. I really want to slap you, you fckng garbage author. Then there was another stupid thing here. The MC regarded being a middleman between transaction as a not a good thing. Well, what can I expect from a braindead author. Like wtf, the MC could gain a spirit bag from that transaction, and this author made the MC help the girl to buy to another store just because he thinks that he's taking advantage of that girl by being a middlemam. Like wtf, you fckng garbage author, being middleman is a bad thing to you? You fckng trash? You are a braindead trash, thats why your novel was not even popular. Real talk author, if you are in a world of cultivation, you are a deadmeat in just a few months because of your stupidity. I really want to slap your stupid head, you idiotic trash. This stupid animal really got into my nerves.

Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant

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