Review Detail of Epic_Gaming_7548 in DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex

I like it a fair amount but do have critiques the writing: Sona: (smiling) "Riser, lost in thought again?" Riser: (turning to look at her) "Ah, Sona. You always appear at the right moments. Just contemplating the night." Sona, noticing Riser's serious expression, asks: "Is something wrong? You seem a bit tense." Riser, trying to dispel Sona's concern, replies: "No, nothing happened. Just thinking about the Rating Game." Sona, approaching Riser, puts a hand on his shoulder. Sona: "Riser, everything will go well. Tomorrow, we'll go to the underworld to meet our families and check out the Rating Game venue. Riser, relaxing a bit, comments: "Yes, seeing my family will be good. Especially Ravel, my sister. I want to spend some time with her before the showdown." Sona, agreeing, smiles: "Certainly. It's going to be an exciting journey. We're in this together, Riser. Now, let's rest. Tomorrow will be a busy day." Riser: (smiling) "You're right, Sona. Let's rest to face what the underworld has in store for us." its just a random sample but damn is it annoying, i mean the words in brackets are annoying enough you could just add 'riser said with a smile' instead of Riser: (smiling) which would make more sense but that's not even the most annoying bit, its written like a play. sona: says this. riser: responds this way. sona: (catatonic) blah blah. it's like its saying what to say and how to act rather than a novel or ff in this case. and its damn repetitive.