Review Detail of Lau_Souza in DXD: The Awakening Of Phenex

First of all, this is DxD... So this is hsrem and this is okay. Writting is okay but seems like a IA talking and acting for other characters. Risee is a bit weak... He has strong powers and it's just a bit strong then orjginal. Next, he has a free hate against him from part of Issei's plot armor, because Sirzechs, Azazel and others don't like or trust him without any good reason. It's a good fanfiction, but for me it's becoming boring. Good luck for you in your path.