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Iameena
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Okayy giving a review, You have a good story line, But I believe when you can do very better, I absolutely love the idea and stuff, But let me give a few pointers 1. Get grammarly or any other app that you think is okay, but preferably I recommended grammarly, it helps with punctuations, spelling errors, And rephrases words, giving you the best word to use instead, I got really confused reading some part of the story, But overall i like it, Good one Author, Fightinggg!!! 🎀💕 2. If you could make the chapters a little longer and maybe give details also, Also start a book from a thrilling scene or something captivating not an introduction, Also update moree 3.character development also, Although while reading the story you get to understand their personality but it seems like the personality kept on changing, Also proper make up a character Overall, Author your’e doing a good job 🎀💕🥰

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Thanks a lot, I will also try harder and harder. Thanks again for reviewing my book. Fighting