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Luizz_Ricardo
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My God, this author must be a newbie to make so many plot holes and forced plots, the guy doesn't even respect the original characters.....................................

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Naruto: the forsaken

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Wil_Unterholzner_2400
Wil_Unterholzner_2400Lv4Wil_Unterholzner_2400

don't like it. Don't read it. it's pretty good, tbh better than those dime a dozen 12 people harem stories

KnightInArmor
KnightInArmorLv4KnightInArmor

please explain on what do you mean by this? or what have you read to made you think like this?

Honoured_Writer
Honoured_WriterLv4Honoured_Writer

The orginal characters don’t act like themselves which author uses their altered personalities to create forced plot holes surrounding the mc

KnightInArmor:please explain on what do you mean by this? or what have you read to made you think like this?
Aizen_calvo
Aizen_calvoLv1Aizen_calvo

I was wondering if you knew the meaning of an Au story?

Honoured_Writer:The orginal characters don’t act like themselves which author uses their altered personalities to create forced plot holes surrounding the mc
Honoured_Writer
Honoured_WriterLv4Honoured_Writer

I was wondering if you knew the phrases plot hole or forced plot because even with the introduction of au there are still plenty of those to go around Not to mention that the only altered part of this universe is the uzumaki family structure and the MCs existence so tell me why Obito acts so differently and spares peoples lives because they showed great comeraderie when that contradicts his entire character and villain ideology

Aizen_calvo:I was wondering if you knew the meaning of an Au story?
James_Carlson_5574
James_Carlson_5574Lv1James_Carlson_5574

Quisiera saber de los agujeros y tramas forzadas, ya que en cuanto a respetar personajes no tendría porque hacerlo puesto que es un ff y al menos en este punto puede hacer lo que desee con los personajes. En cuanto a los demás puntos quiero leer los argumentos.