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Techno_God
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Has potential but needs to stay away from some cliches. Last chapter had foreshadowing like some human gang was going to hunt him down. This will do nothing but seem more annoying than threating, at least when you said you were going to respect power levels. Even in Mystic Falls the humans could hunt the Vampires because they had Emily's help in enchanting a few items. Instead of some cliche plot this gang should just be some flavor to his life than some recurring flea.

Tvd /The Originals : Harper Freed

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Techno_God
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That's good, this story is really good and I hope it's longer than your other side character stories as TVD has a lot of potential to be tapped.

The3Entities:I want to post all the chapters already written to reassure you but don't worry, it's far away... Very far from what you imagined
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I want to post all the chapters already written to reassure you but don't worry, it's far away... Very far from what you imagined