Review Detail of Daoist_Lake in The love they deserve

Writing : Readable Story : Good Character : Still Average Update : 1 Chapter / Week (Maybe) Background : Common on Fanfic. I don't want give too many suggestion : 1. Don't Write R18+ Chapter. It Ruin Story you build. 2. Don't give too many Harem. i don't know average person can satisfy everyone need (Just Be Rational) 3. Give Original MC (Fuutarou and other MC) their fated lover. this is just a suggestion. you can accept it or reject it. because my suggestion doesn't really conflict with the story you want to make. (Sorry my English really bad)