Review Detail of Minoaahh in Omniscient Reader (Alternate Story)

I am a fan of Omniscient Reader's Viewpoint, so I was a bit hesitant to read this story at first. From the first few chapters, I would guess that the author believes the relationship between Kim Dokja and Yoo Joonghyuk in the original novel hasn't been completely explored, thus their relationship became the core of this novel. The exchanges between the two characters create a dynamic that naturally evolves. It is a blend of tension, humor, and even support, which shows the complexities and difficulties of building relationships online. The author uses a minimalist and direct style of narration, where the dialogue and short comments help advance the plot. The pacing is steady, maintaining engagement without overwhelming readers with technical details. However, for those who haven't read the original story, you may feel lost since there's not enough description of the characters' backgrounds. Because it is centered on dialogue and comments, you won't get a complete feel for their surroundings. Sometimes, it feels like two heads having a conversation. Nonetheless, the author's writing style is accessible, which will make this story appeal to most online readers. Great job!