Review Detail of Salem_Zaed in Naruto : Shadows of Resurgence

Honestly I have only read the first 8 chapter and I already have a few things to point out: 1- the chapter are unnecessarily long, and are filled with useless words, the author are basically stretched the sentences and make it super long, with no useful information.( bro this isn’t an essay) 2- the time skips are unreasonable and are in the wrong timing. 3- shikamaru at the age of only a year and a half ( let’s say 2) already awakened his chakra and are training. 4- the Mc has medical information that impressed even tsunadi and she came back to take him as an apprentice. I will be dropping it thanks anyway