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Darksiidde
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First of all, I would like to express my admiration for your work. The way you write is not only captivating but also deeply engaging, allowing readers to fully immerse themselves in the world you've created. It's evident the care and dedication you invest in deepening the characters, giving them dimensions and complexities that make them memorable and often deeply relatable. I especially admire the way the story's background is expertly woven, establishing a rich setting that serves as the perfect backdrop for the development of the characters and plot. That said, I believe that there is always room for growth and development, no matter how talented the writer is. One area that could be further explored in his future works is the dynamic between the secondary characters. While the protagonists are exceptionally well-developed, offering a little more depth to the secondary characters could further enrich the fabric of your narrative, providing new perspectives and enriching the universe you've created. Also, considering the complexity of the world you've drawn, perhaps there could be an even greater exploration of certain elements of the historical background in future chapters or works. Not only would this satisfy the curiosity of the most avid readers, but it would also broaden the scope of your literary universe, making it even more immersive. Em conclusão, gostaria de reiterar minha profunda admiração pelo seu trabalho. It may take a while for this work to turn around, but don't give up and don't abandon this work.

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From Extra to Main: Reincarnated 3 years before Novel timeline

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harem or single lead im hoping its single lead

IamFallenAngel:I feel extremely happy when someone enjoy my novel. I'm beginner in english but 'chatgpt' remove that deficiency from novel. As for side character depth: I will paint them well if they are going to appears in future chapters. In starting chapters: I will focus on MC to show his some good and bad side. Note: This novel is improved version of 'REINCARNATED IN A NOVEL WORLD'. I put around 3 months in that novel and further knew that I'm lacking in many things. So took a break and decided to learn and start from scratch. Again thanks for reviewing my novel.
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I feel extremely happy when someone enjoy my novel. I'm beginner in english but 'chatgpt' remove that deficiency from novel. As for side character depth: I will paint them well if they are going to appears in future chapters. In starting chapters: I will focus on MC to show his some good and bad side. Note: This novel is improved version of 'REINCARNATED IN A NOVEL WORLD'. I put around 3 months in that novel and further knew that I'm lacking in many things. So took a break and decided to learn and start from scratch. Again thanks for reviewing my novel.