Review Detail of Woshi in Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)

tldr: Overall I've enjoyed it. There are irks for average viewers. Transitions between plots could use work. But the characters are active, the plot interesting, and the dialogue is fun. Personally I've enjoyed the novel. While the novel does have some irks most people wouldn't tolerate and a lot of irks that an average webnovel reader wouldn't enjoy such as attempts at character development, drama, non-gary su character, etc etc, it is at least of higher quality than other garbage on this platform. A few critiques I do have is slow down a bit and give a chapter or two to build up to certain events. Monologues here, conversations there, perspective changes, introspection all around. The story feels like it's hopping from one idea to another and though I can see the direction and reasoning in my run-through it was abrupt and to most, out of place/forced.