Review Detail of Shoop_The_Mystic in My Rage For All

Inconsistent Creater here,I just wanna say that I'm mostly writing this for fun. It's not meant to be groundbreaking or anything. This is an idea I've had for the past few months and I've never heard of anything writing about exactly what I'm writing here, so...Feel free to love or hate, I honestly don't mind any and all input, be it negative or positive. (but I would much prefer positive criticism, if you could)