Hi just a reader here personally love the fact your translating this but it's a bad story. Like you said in your review a lot of bias and poison. Story concept amazing could have a system tied to just giving him stuff from the Gate of Babylon instead of gatcha or a gatcha for the tresures inside of it from the original GoB. dont think I'm personally going to continue reading after your review 1 or 2 lovers cool but the mc just seems childish with the pokemon style harem it seems to be going towards. Thanks for your hard work tho I recommend you do write your own version of this and credit the translated version.
XElenea
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