Review Detail of Recklesspen in Saga of The Sage

The author here trying to (I don't know what am trying to do) this book was first called Chronicle of Death, it was rushed and there was a lot of inconsistency in it so I deleted it and rewrote it from the beginning, What to expect ====== 1) Although the main character is Shane Myers there would be other characters that I would write about as this book focuses on the Selected Reincarnators (Or whatever they are called).2) the first Arc would be an introduction Arc, where you all will be introduced to the Mc and the side characters.3) I will change from the Main MC POV to the other Side Mc whenever the Mc is out of commission I will add new info as it comes up and please let me know if you want an auxiliary chapter about the power system