Everything so far is good not much world building yet but it’s a very enjoyable story. keep up the good work
HikariKage
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LIKEThank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts on my novel! I'm thrilled to hear that you're enjoying the story. I appreciate your feedback on the world-building and rest assured, I'll be working diligently to enhance that aspect as the narrative unfolds. Your encouragement means a lot, and I'm grateful for your support. If you have any specific suggestions or areas you'd like to see more world-building, I'm all ears! Thanks again for your kind words.
HikariKage:Thank you so much for taking the time to share your thoughts on my novel! I'm thrilled to hear that you're enjoying the story. I appreciate your feedback on the world-building and rest assured, I'll be working diligently to enhance that aspect as the narrative unfolds. Your encouragement means a lot, and I'm grateful for your support. If you have any specific suggestions or areas you'd like to see more world-building, I'm all ears! Thanks again for your kind words.