The system is disgusting, the quests make the MC seem like a puppet, the dungeons make the world travel and any participation in the current world useless, and the classes also make the entire story pointless. Why participate in the world and find ways to get stronger when the system will just give it to you, it makes the entire premise of the story and traveling to other worlds pointless. The levels are fine but it should be based on skills she has and practicing to level up, that way she can get stronger faster. The MC of this novel is the system because it does everything and anyone can achieve success with it, the MC has no sense of participation in the story and can be replaced with a pig. Whats the point of picking the world and family if shes just going to be a Harry Potter wizard, you havent even explored the magic of this world.
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LIKEEverything you just described is so BORING! Why travel around TVD world to find different witch covens to learn magic when the system will just give it? Why get involved in the plot when you can just go into the dungeon to get more powerful? Why make your own magical items when the quest will just give them? Is the system going to fuck her girl too? Why travel to another world when the system can just give everything from that world once you choose a class? It only takes 3 characters to make the entire Harry Potter world useless, will the next class give out 6 infinity stones or the mother box? God forbid she go to those worlds and get them herself, that would be too much plot.
ArtoriaPendragon_:The quest rewards will also lessen by a good bit sooner or later, as the quests become more difficult. At it’s route this is an overpowered fanfiction, so you should have expected at least a little bit of overpowered aspects.
Second, her doing these dungeons and leveling to get stronger is for a reason. She will be traveling to worlds that will make her look like a bug. Even in TVD, if someone is fast enough they would kill her easily. I plan on her going to worlds with literal cosmic entities that can destroy worlds with a flick of their finger. This is absolutely nothing in the grand scheme of things.
Third, the system does give her the knowledge and comprehension, but she still has to practice these skills, and master them. Not to mention that the Wizard is simply her first class, and the probably the easiest. Future classes will be drastically more difficult to learn due to the sheer amount of power they would give her.
Her leveling right now is drastically faster than it would be if it went off her skills and capacities. As of right now she is growing at an exponential rate, only because that is how most gamer fanfics are, they grow rapidly in the beginning, and then slow down. Which is exactly what is going to happen in this one. She will get the Wizard class maxed, a decent chunk of the next class, and then slow down dramatically.
The quest rewards will also lessen by a good bit sooner or later, as the quests become more difficult. At it’s route this is an overpowered fanfiction, so you should have expected at least a little bit of overpowered aspects.
ArtoriaPendragon_:First of all, none of the actual quests are forced upon her, she does them for the rewards because why would she deny good and easy rewards?
ArtoriaPendragon_:Second, her doing these dungeons and leveling to get stronger is for a reason. She will be traveling to worlds that will make her look like a bug. Even in TVD, if someone is fast enough they would kill her easily. I plan on her going to worlds with literal cosmic entities that can destroy worlds with a flick of their finger. This is absolutely nothing in the grand scheme of things.