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Review Detail of Rayyer in Hero x Villain Online (ARRPG)

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Rayyer
RayyerLv133mthRayyer

I'm really enjoying how the story is developing at first I commented that the mc was overpowering but I change my mind as the story developing the wordl is pretty balance mostly leaning into overpower but balance. the characters are are very expressive and different giving the wordl a more vibrant and dark really like yo real work no body is just a characterization of a trope for the most part and are pretty likeable. the jokes are hit or miss the theme is mature. not dark not edge it well written with a maturity of an adult when "certain" things are talk about/approach. I belive the written actually wants you write a story rather the self insert generic edgy fantasy like most work p.s I believe the romance in the book was done a bit poorly no build up or nothing just bang a couple

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Hero x Villain Online (ARRPG)

SurelyNotEli

Liked it!

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SurelyNotEli
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Thanks the review (They aren’t a couple)