Review Detail of Pekokopiko in Spider-Man Mayhem

the concept is common, the plot itself does have decent structure. the only thing that holding this fic down is the author's laziness and his tendencies of putting sht he doesn't understand about like business, technology, science and biology that can be easily solved by few second Google search and 2 minutes of reading. but then again this is nothing but wish fulfillment fic, don't know about later chapters since I only read until they got the spider powers but it's enough for me. here is an example of said problem: business: both Peter and Gwen go to Norman for partnership for the drug both of they found for a contract of $500k/years Biology: The author himself stated than Peter can lift up to 15 ton while Gwen can lift up to 10 ton, But somehow Gwen is a lot faster than Peter because she is more Flexible and lighter than Peter, how the author thinking work is beyond me. While flexibility affect speed that doesn't mean have faster speed. the respon of the author is "Peter is heavier" like bruh.