Review Detail of JayScribe in But Wife, I Really Am a Villain!

My biggest beef with the author is the slow release. And why? Because the story is great. I love the system, the way the mc thinks but nothing wins me over like believable characters. In the first 11 chapters no one felt fake or obnoxious. It was a genuine interaction between top level guys of the city. No dumb killing or loss of face. The style of the author is great too. His sentences are well formulated and he has given time to his dialogues. I think it needs more time to ground in setting but I think everything will be revealed in time. Keep it up and please...don't drop this.