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nadaxzq
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Hello, author. Well, what can I say about that... I've seen this "Unlimited Epiphanies" idea before, but it was written by what could only be described as a young, hot-blooded racist Chinese man who didn't care about exploring the potential of what should be the focus of his novel, exploring the maximum capacity of this system while the MC follows his journey. And finally here I discovered a gem. From the beginning, MC has already explored the IMMENSE potential that its system offers. The MC's first interaction with other characters already suggests that this will be a very well-written story, with no flat characters and no apparent motivation to do what they do. You really took the time to create a backstory (even a basic one) for Yingling. 😨 Normally other authors would simply say very quickly what happened to her and voilà, a member of the harem, a member who doesn't know how to think for himself and just follows the MC like a dog. Normally this should be the basics, but there are few authors nowadays who care about this. Anyway, if well explored, the novel has gigantic potential because of the system. If combined with some good plot and non-2D characters, this is possibly a masterpiece in the making. I'm not good at evaluations, so it must be a little difficult to understand what I said. I apologize in advance. Continue your work, author. Good luck!

Cultivation: I Have Unlimited Epiphanies in the Cultivation World

Lolster45

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Lolster45
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Thank you so much😭😭 Although it's my first novel ever, I hope I won't disappoint you. Leave any suggestions in the comments as to how I can improve and if I start to go astray. Thank you again for your review 💓.

TrueMonarch00
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Polygamy
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is this a harem or no harem?

Lolster45:Thank you so much😭😭 Although it's my first novel ever, I hope I won't disappoint you. Leave any suggestions in the comments as to how I can improve and if I start to go astray. Thank you again for your review 💓.
Lolster45
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Right now, I'm leaning towards non harem, but it could change depending on what readers want.

Polygamy:is this a harem or no harem?
Fkhri_Maulana
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I vote non harem

Lolster45:Right now, I'm leaning towards non harem, but it could change depending on what readers want.
That_Annoying_guy
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Same

Fkhri_Maulana:I vote non harem
That_Annoying_guy
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Did you decide?

Lolster45:Right now, I'm leaning towards non harem, but it could change depending on what readers want.