overall it's a good beginning, but it would be way better if you spent more time on explaining the world a bit better, for exemple I still don't quite get how many people were reincarnated
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LIKEI have added this as well in the same chapter! I love your feedback on all of this, very helpful!! :)
JustS0me0neFrench:thanks for changing it !just a quick question, could you also say somewhere how long ago some of the people where transported here ?
thanks for changing it !just a quick question, could you also say somewhere how long ago some of the people where transported here ?
Ccleavell:Thank you so much for the review and feedback! I went back through my chapters in took in what you have said and rewrote Chapter 4 based on your feedback! I appreciate it so much!! :)
Ccleavell:I have added this as well in the same chapter! I love your feedback on all of this, very helpful!! :)
NextChapter_Please:Is this book ongoing or completed or perhaps on hold?