Review Detail of pop_smoke6 in An Extra’s POV

Normally I refrain from leaving reviews because, the whole “those who can, do, and those who can’t, review” thing. But I’m a little drunk and am really getting pussed at this novel so here it is. So much potential. The world, the characters, the fantasy elements. All top tier. (I gave them low stars because I want to make sure my review gets to the author. But make no mistake the world building is IMMACULATE) The chapters that are 1 conversation long, the really overused “misunderstandings” trope that is the basis of almost every “plot twist”…… not so much. I really do like the story, which is why I come back every few months. But then I pissed after like 15 chapters because the mic is scared to talk to the “love of his heart”, but is cool with slaughtering whole armies of people in 5 seconds or less. (literally 5 sec or less because his ability is just that OP, he’s the strongest character by a HUGE margin, and spend most of the time hiding his strength some really dumb reason.) Long story short, there’s a line between suspense and foolishness. This novel crosses that line more often than not.