Review Detail of GeneralDeFartos_L in An Extra’s POV

Disclaimer: Just read till chapter 22. I gave it a chance and gave up, it was boring, the main problems: Author drags out the plot too much and writes every detail when it's redundant (author, just ask yourself this when writing, if the reader didn't read this paragraph or chapter, will it affect reading experience and plot progression?). Second problem is the story being overused (student otherworlders, save the world, overall plot progression) you didn't give me enough reason to stay with the story. Lastly, this just feels like a kiddo story, like it's directed at middle schoolers, shounen. Mainly because the characters are about 16 and the story portrayed them as adults (their thinking and choices and all that) the mc always thinks critically, Blondie leader, and others just act above their age. (Hallmark of shounen is making kiddos appear more than what they are.