Review Detail of MAJD_3390 in The Bizarre Love Game Where Everyone's a Yandere
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The first and second chapter paragraphs are repeated with different description like four times fix your novel I don’t know why nobody is saying anything in the reviews I don’t know if it’s repeated in later chapters but I’m not sticking to find out
The Bizarre Love Game Where Everyone's a Yandere
BlazeMaddox
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Read the first and second chapter and you will instantly find them those two chapters are repeated like four times if this a translation then it’s a translation error
BlazeMaddox:Thank you very much for your comment. Please help me identify the "four repeated different descriptions," and I will revise them one by one.
I appreciate your constructive comments. Admittedly, being a new author, there's a lot for me to learn in writing. I've noticed the repetitive and clichéd issues you've mentioned and am actively working on improvements. I hope your next reading experience will be more enjoyable. Thank you for your understanding and encouragement!
MAJD_3390:Read the first and second chapter and you will instantly find them those two chapters are repeated like four times if this a translation then it’s a translation error