Review Detail of AvatarLOK2 in In TVD/TO as Kol Mikaelson

Item: In TVD/TO as Kol Mikaelson
Rating: 5

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This is fun. I'm loving the personality of the characters. I can feel the distinctness of each. The writing formatting isn't my favorite and could potentially be improved upon more but, I like it. This story has a lot of potential and I hope you continue and improve.

In TVD/TO as Kol Mikaelson

ItachiWeasel

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thanks bro what do u feel is not good enough as u can see I am trying to improve my style is it not flowing properly or is there some other issue

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