Review Detail of Josh_Richie in In Marvel with Greatest System
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Novel will probably be dropped soon. Considering the Overpowered MC, inconsistent Power set, and abilities from all over the place, This story will get harder for the author to continue.Also, from the Way the words and sentences are used, one could see it the writings of a newbie.It's good, considering he's probably a beginner who's out to have fun writing a whole new story, but down the line, even he himself will get bored or confused on how to go forward.The most off putting aspect of this is the World Traveling. When I saw him leaving the Marvel world, I simply dropped the book. It ain't worth it
In Marvel with Greatest System
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Author san a question, isn't creating clones with personality may case problems later ,since in the end people who know these clones are treating them as such ?I feel conflict about this subject ,and also is there feedback loop between mc and clones like if one learns the other gets it?
Boring_World:don't worry buddy, you probably haven't read marvel comics, that's why you are saying my oc is op but continue reading yo are in for a surprise