Review Detail of Glitz1 in In Marvel with Greatest System

Item: In Marvel with Greatest System
Rating: 3.4

Review detail

Glitz1Lv146mthGlitz1

The story has a lot of potential but it feels a bit to hurried and the grammar is a bit off but otherwise okay. I’ve only read 16 chapters and I feel that a few things have been left out without being mentioned again.

In Marvel with Greatest System

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Enigmatic_DreamLv3Enigmatic_Dream

I think the Grammer gets better at later chaps, probably from 20 or 30 onwards

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