Review Detail of ProfaneImmortal in HP: Magic Punk

Item: HP: Magic Punk
Rating: 4

Review detail

ProfaneImmortalLv131mthProfaneImmortal

Bro find a proofreader, there are tonnes of mistakes. And I know you think you're being funny with the 4th wall breaks but I feel it breaks the immersion in the story. The plot is fine.

HP: Magic Punk

kamidemond

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kamidemondAuthorkamidemond

Alright I too am thinking of finding a proof reader soon. And 4th wall well let reduce it

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