Review Detail of Unpaid_FoxGod in Danmachi - I'am Luffy!

you somewhat captured the essence of luffys personality in the first 3 chaps, though the part with rose was kinda a turnoff since i dont recall luffy reacting that way when he met the minks, maybe you could use the minks short arc as a reference for how luffy deals with demi-humans. )i dont recall the arc much) but over all its great so far.