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Daoist730sPk
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In 18 chapters nothing happened in the story. There was only a brief conversation with Hestia. The story moves too slowly and you write a lot of unnecessary words in each chapter.ㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤㅤ

Reborn as Hades In PJO

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Agreed. This is not really a good fiction. Most of the chapters are info-dump summaries. So far everything for the MC has been about wasting time. I could've endured it had there been any kinda development but there's been nothing at all.

DarkKnight32
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This is true but the story is really good it doesn’t deserve this low rating im thinking on putting the story on a list and come back in few months to read it but im afraid that the author will drop it

A_Sleepless_dream
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Dude the Mc is weak and has been nerfed when there was nothing to nerf while he is acting as a slave to his siblings….

DarkKnight32:This is true but the story is really good it doesn’t deserve this low rating im thinking on putting the story on a list and come back in few months to read it but im afraid that the author will drop it
Daoist730sPk
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This story is terrible, only people with problems like you can like it.

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OkayRose
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And idiot's with "Daoist" in their username reading horrible Naruto fanfiction shouldn't be talking AT ALL 😊👉🚪

Daoist730sPk:This story is terrible, only people with problems like you can like it.
Daoist730sPk
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So everyone who reads Naruto fanfiction is an idiot? You're ridiculous🤡🤡🤡. Don't you wonder why so many people liked my review and no one liked yours? Because you're the weird one who gives 5 stars to a terrible fanfiction.

OkayRose:And idiot's with "Daoist" in their username reading horrible Naruto fanfiction shouldn't be talking AT ALL 😊👉🚪
OkayRose
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You liked your own review didn't you? Who's actually the 🤡? And yes. If you read Naruto Fanfiction, go ahead g say it to the nearest person and see how they react. 🤣 Idiot!

Daoist730sPk:So everyone who reads Naruto fanfiction is an idiot? You're ridiculous🤡🤡🤡. Don't you wonder why so many people liked my review and no one liked yours? Because you're the weird one who gives 5 stars to a terrible fanfiction.
Daoist730sPk
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I did a review highlighting various problems with this fanfiction and many people agreed with me. Then you come along and criticize me by putting in the middle without any logic and without any reason the fact that I like Naruto. Do you realize the nonsense you wrote? So, shall we talk about your fake review? You gave 5 stars to a fanfiction that objectively has many problems. Apparently fanfiction with problems only appeals to people with problems😂😂😂😂😂😂

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Daoist730sPk
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The author reading the reviews understands where he needs to improve but you are not helping him at all since you gave a fake review to a fanfiction with obvious problems. But like I said, fanfiction with problems is liked by people with problems so I'm not surprised you like it😂😂😂😂

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OkayRose
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Your review's are a waste of time fam 😂 If you're still acting dumb then by all means stop commenting because you are a waste of time and most likely a waste of space! Your idea of helping an author is being rude and obnoxious anyway!

Daoist730sPk:The author reading the reviews understands where he needs to improve but you are not helping him at all since you gave a fake review to a fanfiction with obvious problems. But like I said, fanfiction with problems is liked by people with problems so I'm not surprised you like it😂😂😂😂
OkayRose
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Also I don't like my own comments like a certain small 🍆 troll

Daoist730sPk:This story is terrible, only people with problems like you can like it.
Daoist730sPk
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A lot of people agree with my review because I told the truth unlike you who only wrote nonsense. From your comments it is clear that you are a disturbed boy and for this reason I feel sorry for you. I wish you a good recovery.

OkayRose:Your review's are a waste of time fam 😂 If you're still acting dumb then by all means stop commenting because you are a waste of time and most likely a waste of space! Your idea of helping an author is being rude and obnoxious anyway!
FinnsRevenge
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Your reaction to this review has to be one of the most autistic I've seen in a while. The guy's review was neither rude nor obnoxious. If you need an example on either of those simply look at yourself. I for one found his review both helpful and accurate so would you kindly pull your tongue from the author's buthole and quit acting like a child because you can't handle negative criticism in your safe space

OkayRose:Your review's are a waste of time fam 😂 If you're still acting dumb then by all means stop commenting because you are a waste of time and most likely a waste of space! Your idea of helping an author is being rude and obnoxious anyway!
OkayRose
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Oh wow, your comment has deeply affected me and has made me reconsider so much, thank you for writing me such a long essay that I won't bother reading ❤️

FinnsRevenge:Your reaction to this review has to be one of the most autistic I've seen in a while. The guy's review was neither rude nor obnoxious. If you need an example on either of those simply look at yourself. I for one found his review both helpful and accurate so would you kindly pull your tongue from the author's buthole and quit acting like a child because you can't handle negative criticism in your safe space
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just take the l bro

OkayRose:Your review's are a waste of time fam 😂 If you're still acting dumb then by all means stop commenting because you are a waste of time and most likely a waste of space! Your idea of helping an author is being rude and obnoxious anyway!