Review Detail of QuiteSarcastic in Naruto : Back to the Past

-I honestly looked forward to reading a proper and decently rated Naruto fanfic, but in all honesty, this was as far from that as it could have been. -Writing quality is decent, and the flow and explanations are well put together. -Story Development... This is where things start to go downhill. It's not that its... bad. It's more like it lacks reasoning and logic whenever the MC is given something, his reactions are unnatural as if a Chinese cultivator suddenly takes his place. Naruto suddenly will kill 12-15-year-olds to defend the "loved" ones he so conveniently forgets about who is left behind for his crush on Sasuke. -Character Design... kinda went ham on the Story Development and added tidbits there, but all I can say is that if you are looking for a "Naruto" fic, then don't expect one here. He is as far from a "Naruto-like" character as humanly possible. -World Background, nothing to say about that one. The fact that the prologue was a convoluted mess of epic proportions kind of set a bad example: "Sasuke kills himself to end whatever dream-like conflict between him and Naruto for some gods' forsaken reason. All that being said, give it a shot; it's not bad fan fiction by any means. It's just that you have to perhaps skim over certain details to enjoy it like proper reading material.