Review Detail of abel84842 in ABOVE THE GODS (Eternal System)

Yeah I know those parts were really written fast forward and in a haphazard way by the introduction of a new girl. One of the major reasons for this mistake is that l am writing a chapter in a single day and uploading it the next day. As I am a new author, I am inexperienced how hard it is to write a chapter in just a day along with my studies. Now that I have changed the uploading time to 2 chaps / week, it will surely get better. Please co-operate with me.Join my discord link for more info : https://discord.com/invite/7Ys5T5JdBG