Review Detail of ErickHenrique_BR in Harry Potter with Technology System

Item: Harry Potter with Technology System
Rating: 3

Review detail

ErickHenrique_BRLv55mthErickHenrique_BR

I didn't like that an AI is manipulating the MC, in fact, it seems that the MC doesn't know how to do anything without the AI, another reason is that it's a technological System but why doesn't everything he does have anything to do with creating technology? It seems more like a help system and not a technological one, if he was just going to learn magic it would be better to put the title as a magic system

Harry Potter with Technology System

TheFanficGod

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TheCynicalStrayCAtLv13TheCynicalStrayCAt

LMAO.. I didn't know that the reader based in WN would be this demanding.

2mth

TheFanficGodAuthorTheFanficGod

He just learned he is magical. Isn't it normal for System to explain him how to do things? You expect me to throw all character development because of that? He will grow up, mentally, physically, magically and everything else, but he just got his system and learned he is a wizard.

5mth

elpepeLv1elpepe

concuerdo, no se si harry es el protagonista o la ia

5mth

Gurnoor_Singh_4533Lv3Gurnoor_Singh_4533

It is taking too long... pick up the pace and get things started author...

TheFanficGod:He just learned he is magical. Isn't it normal for System to explain him how to do things? You expect me to throw all character development because of that? He will grow up, mentally, physically, magically and everything else, but he just got his system and learned he is a wizard.

5mth

Zzz_808Lv3Zzz_808

That's not going to happen most patreon authors always hold off on getting readers to subscribe then once they get some money they go tell another story

Gurnoor_Singh_4533:It is taking too long... pick up the pace and get things started author...

5mth

literl010Lv1literl010

Just because there's a couple of scammers out there doesn't mean everyone is. Look at this author's history, there are 2 fully completed stories so far.

Zzz_808:That's not going to happen most patreon authors always hold off on getting readers to subscribe then once they get some money they go tell another story

5mth

Mann_TeufortianLv3Mann_Teufortian

is the AI malicious? Do you you know yet who created the system, why Harry got it,?

5mth

KittyperfectLv14Kittyperfect

want some spoilers... then where's the mystery will be then.

Mann_Teufortian:is the AI malicious? Do you you know yet who created the system, why Harry got it,?

4mth

ErozothDraeorLv6ErozothDraeor

Thinking AI\power 101, can't have two semi main characters smart, thinking, planning. One has to be the brain and the other has to be walking, like a robot being commanded by the brain.

3mth