Author is dumb as bricks, it’s hilarious to see him try to write a genius character. It shows in his writing that he’s extremely insecure about his own intelligence. He tries to justify dumb writing decisions about the plot, character motivation, and story direction. Instead of making the main character seem intelligent we get an extremely stupid character who can spawn in technology. What this comes off as is an inferiority complex put onto text where the author fights tooth and nail with his own lack of intelligence. If you hate dumb decisions made by supposedly powerful characters then this is not for you. If you hate characters with random and unexplained motivations then this is not for you. Example: the author makes the main character follows Batman’s footsteps, but he’s never explained the trauma that Bruce had of bats. So it just seems like “I’m in Batman’s body so I must become Batman” nice justification dumbass. If you hate linear storylines then this isn’t for you. You know when a shitty writer writes a story but just copies down the source material and changes it a little. Like those naruto fanfics where they have godlike power but everything goes exactly the same for no reason because the author can’t think of anything creative. This is it.
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