Review Detail of outsidr in ReLife In Fake Twilight

i enjoyed the first 2 chapters thanks for the brief overview of the 16 years getting them up to cannon timeline.

i enjoyed it but the height of tritan is really buggin me with his bloodline and the fact that his wish said he dont want any weakness of tristan ..its already a plot hole fix this ...hope you can consider it thank you

Height isn’t a weakness… and I don’t consider that to be a plot hole but to each their own.

well i agree that height is not a weakness but considering he got the purest hanma bloodline it is a plot hole considering that baki has a somewhat dilluted bloodine since hanma is a long lasted clan evry other enma are above 6feet heck even the half brther of baki is 8feet tall ...anyway it is your novel im just making a suggestion i still enjoyed the first 2 chapter so thank you

I see your point. He’ll get taller just not right off the bat.

hehe thanks im glad you got my point i didnt want to sound like a Karen xD by the way your writing is awsome and ill continue reading your other work but this one got me hooked pretty good hope you realease fast ;) ill give some well deserved power stone :D

I’ll give it a try later just the background wish made mi a lil upset better he was a millionaire son or whatever would have help support him later on

can you tell me which universe is mixed in it

just don't mix dc and marvel, never ends well

fake yo.... you changed the name 😂

felt it was more accurate lol