Review Detail of BrazillianFox in Minato May Have Been Your Father But He Ain't Your Daddy

To be honest, don't read this, the author sounds like a child complaining about everything and any criticism he posts in the chapter complaining like a child,the system is seriously broken, the stats are ridiculous things like Physique of 10 Kakashi (1 Guy) and chakra control of 1 Tsunade with just a few months of "training", with each limit break like 1,2,5,10 etc until reaching 8-9 for type: physical, chakra, fuuinjutsu etc the MC wins a draw that gives him some skill in the same category,The problem is that they are generally considered strong skills from another world,each chapter is him complaining about someone and being honest, even my assessment is in danger of disappearing... this fic is nothing more than a self-insertion and wish fulfillment,the characters like Ayame that he mentions was never said when she appeared,the ages of characters are not defined, for example Yugao who in the same chapter is 14 years old then 12 and then 14 again, Anko who is 9 then 12 then 14 years old,he says he "fixed" the Chinese fic he used as "inspiration"but even with the strong Chinese influence of the "original fic" she is better, so in short: - Author who acts like a child and does not accept criticism - He doesn't even have control over basic things about the characters, age, etc. - Write the way you want because as he says himself "I am the author" and everything happens as he wants - MC without personality, and weak an d bad story If what you want a NSFW Naruto fic there are others a thousand times better in this site, don't read this And yes, I predict that within a few chapters released after I make this review the author will have a child tantrum in some chapter, I don't know how this is so well rated,but if it were posted on another site it wouldn't even have 2 stars in reviews