This fix is mostly good. The writing quality is good with there being minimal errors along with well explained power ups and such. The only gripe I have is how quick he is to demonize the Gods. Before even meeting a God, he decides that ALL GODS are evil, deserving of hatred, and one of the main reasons for human suffering when the vast majority are A) Following the rules set by Ouranos and B) don’t know the story behind the dungeon.
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LIKEyou now like e small mental order to heit gods ( I'm not sure because i haven't rid oll of the fanfic yet 👉👈 ) so i might be seeing nonsense
Artist_Arton:i agree with your opinion but i might add that then dangon Crete him because of its heated the gods so it's likely that dangon influenced him like thatimage
Artist_Arton:you now like e small mental order to heit gods ( I'm not sure because i haven't rid oll of the fanfic yet 👉👈 ) so i might be seeing nonsenseimage
Artist_Arton:you now like e small mental order to heit gods ( I'm not sure because i haven't rid oll of the fanfic yet 👉👈 ) so i might be seeing nonsenseimage