Review Detail of Tim_QQQ in Kakashi: A new life another world

its written well enough, but the story development is just weird. i dont understand the choice to make kakashi a 5 year old if you were going to so quickly start a romantic relationship with someone. it only makes everything weird IMO. the relationship itself was incredibly forced due to that chapter where Yennefer and Kakashi where in that illusion world for years. like.. cool they spent 10 years together but the readers dont see any of that past 1 chapter. it felt like you went from 0 to 100 just so the author could hurry along a romance because they couldn't figure out how to write one properly. honestly, with the age of the character, the weird story development, the horrible romance, and nothing interesting happening i cant imagine why anyone would want to read past chapter 15 or so