Review Detail of OpN in My Virtual Girlfriend Is Actually a Lady From the Richest Family

The Authors writing style makes it feel like they're a non-native english speaker who kind of knows English, but is using a bad translator. There's is a lot of awkward phrasing and obtuse dialogue. It's wordy in a bad way, as the characters angst and drama doesn't flow. Each paragraph is like a sentence when properly worded. This is hard to read. The characters are very one dimensional so far, and we hardly have any backstory to the main character or his history with the female lead other than a sentence explaining how they met in a game. It feels rushed but with awkward dialogue it becomes lengthy while feeling rushed.