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Review Detail of PolarKuma in Dark Dominator of Pirates

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From the first 5 chapters, I think the fanfic is a translation(?). I can't be sure since it was never stated that it was? The story itself is interesting, the idea of it to be more specific. A blackbeard SI. However, the way it is written and structured just screams that it was from a chinese author. Not that there is wrong with being one. BUT it was not spared from some of the typical cliches chinese authors often have with their writing style. So there's that. Now with regards to its translation, it was traslated well being it is reasonably readable. From that I mean it has a sense of grammar, so you can read it peacefully. The spelling mistakes on the names of the characters and weapons on the other hand were a lot, which can be fixed pretty easily if the translator/author took the time to do a double read before and after uploading it. There were mistakes which don't make sense to me how you can mistook them like whitebeard's hair being blue?? mistooking whitey bay for weevil? It would be understandable if the fic was transalated, but in the case it is not then I'm not sure if we are reading/watching the same One Piece.

Dark Dominator of Pirates

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It is a translation, i try to make it easily readable.