Review Detail of JayChan77 in unexpected path (marvel)
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The writing is excellent. Just please don't make it a harem and hope you let MC handle all the domestic level threats first before blasting off into space. Would like to see where it goes. Best of luck Author.
unexpected path (marvel)
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you have to have a bit of context of how a real harem works , most of the real harems were done by kings for hedonism or to get an heir and in those harem most females had contempt for other . there are many good authors who wrote good stories but the harem destroyed their story as they couldn't integrate it properly.
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