Review Detail of RyanJade in Fictional Echo: An Extra's Tale

My first review in a few years.Writing Quality: It's alright, nothing major flaw for now.Story development: Just getting there.Character design: It's better to give the MC something that I have, a trained brain. I was not all that into memorization when I was a kid, still smarter than most of my age but growing up my family taught how to study and that ended with me having a brain that had a somewhat of a almost perfect memory as long as I have really invested into the said subject and have some key words in my heads regarding the said topic.World background : Not so bad for now but I love the story so far. Hope this story won't drop.chChapter 14 so far