Review Detail of JuicyGrape in The Tree of Sarasin: The Cost of Desires

Okay so, I would like to bring to your attention the Chapters being scrambled😕–might want to fix that- and also your grammar is great! not many errors as long as someone is not a stickler with grammar, but I do want to say that without any Prologue or Synopsis, your chapter one can come out to be a little too strong and overwhelming with all the sudden scenes, names, worldbuilding (background context of events)... overall it seems like it has a lot of potential🥰