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So close to being a really good book. But the issue with mc transitioning into COTE, without inheriting memory or atleast figuring out his background and the issue with manabu and the other guy, going straight to the conclusion that it’s magic in a world where such things don’t exist, ruins it. Quick note to author. If u have to desperately defend ur point repeatedly. Then instead of being so defensive, try to figure out why the readers make the point. U have incredible potential as a writer, but u lack the ability to take Critism.
[Multiverse] Sex System In Classroom of The Elite
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I think you're misunderstanding the reason I defend my point in the comments. I have given sufficient reason for why the Manabu plot 'wasn't' absurd. Is it normal for a human to suddenly catch fire and turn into ash. No it's not, flames of that degree are impossible to erupt from nowhere. And the whole Manabu suspecting him was based on the slight possibility of his disappearance of his while the clerk was killed based on the slight suspicion they had. Again, what Manabu concluded was a very very wild guess just to fluster Tatsuya but if you read ahead then you'll realise Tatsuya deliberately created the situation where he'll be suspected. It wouldn't take him more than a minute or two to kill the clerk before coming back but he intentionally waited ten minutes. If Tatsuya simply denied it and didn't further the conversation Manabu obviously wouldn't continue with his ridiculous theory. Criticism should be accepted over a valid point, not something that is justified. It's my duty as a writer to inform webnovel readers, who inherently dislike 'revealing' stuff, about why there isn't a need to be biased. You can say you don't like it and I'll happily agree but you can't call it wrong or ridiculous. Also for your point about memories, everyone has a preference but there's no need for memories when he'll mostly travel with the body he currently has, as in Tatsuya Yamamoto's body. Of course if you don't like this then I have nothing to say, it's your personal preference. Genuine critisism? I'd love it!
Once again. You keep trying to defend ur point. If something likes this happened in the real world. There would be many idiots who would try to justify that it’s supernaturals. But geniuses would try to discover the science behind it rather the superstition. Wow…one day scientist discover lizards can regrow tails…wow…scientists can discover the jellyfish are immortals. It’s magic😫! No tf it ain’t. They’ll try to figure the underlying cause. That’s how people who aren’t gullible are. Especiallly COTE. Which is literally a normal world. And about my point of memories. It’s about preference. But rather the flow of the story. If mc got reincarnated as ayanokoji with no system. The only adavatge he’d have is that he knows the story. He ain’t ayanokoji l, neither does he have the memories of ayanokoji. Once something changes from canon. He’d be useless. Ingeriting memories l, even in a superficial way, allows the main characters to adapt. That’s why every…every single reincanation has mc inherit memories. Id be fine if u didn’t do it. But u try and make him this genius. Which simply does not work with the story. U keep trying justify ridiculous points simply because u can’t accept criticism. I’m not even hating on you. I even told that u have great potential and even rated this book quite high.
AlmightySkyDxddy:I think you're misunderstanding the reason I defend my point in the comments. I have given sufficient reason for why the Manabu plot 'wasn't' absurd. Is it normal for a human to suddenly catch fire and turn into ash. No it's not, flames of that degree are impossible to erupt from nowhere. And the whole Manabu suspecting him was based on the slight possibility of his disappearance of his while the clerk was killed based on the slight suspicion they had. Again, what Manabu concluded was a very very wild guess just to fluster Tatsuya but if you read ahead then you'll realise Tatsuya deliberately created the situation where he'll be suspected. It wouldn't take him more than a minute or two to kill the clerk before coming back but he intentionally waited ten minutes. If Tatsuya simply denied it and didn't further the conversation Manabu obviously wouldn't continue with his ridiculous theory. Criticism should be accepted over a valid point, not something that is justified. It's my duty as a writer to inform webnovel readers, who inherently dislike 'revealing' stuff, about why there isn't a need to be biased. You can say you don't like it and I'll happily agree but you can't call it wrong or ridiculous. Also for your point about memories, everyone has a preference but there's no need for memories when he'll mostly travel with the body he currently has, as in Tatsuya Yamamoto's body. Of course if you don't like this then I have nothing to say, it's your personal preference. Genuine critisism? I'd love it!
Looks like you're refusing to accept what I'm actually telling you. I'm very grateful that you like my book enough to rate it high but I simply do not agree with what you're saying. Of course geniuses would go about their way to find the reason behind it but when the first seemingly impossible guess was confirmed there was no chance to 'scientifically' study it (and that too about a human crumbling into ash, it's incredibly funny). Manabu won't take the risk because of his sister and Nagumo has his own plans as hinted in the recent chapters (on patrëëon). And about the memories... Look I don't know why you're so hung up about it. This isn't a soul transfer story. He'll be going to different worlds in the BODY HE CURRENTLY HAS (can't use bold so I'll capitalise). Memories do not matter for a simple world he is in. Why does he need to 'adapt' in a school where probably know one knows his previous self? And what genius are you talking about? You can't be serious. He's done literally nothing special besides cleverly use the information about the characters he has to manipulate them. Do you underestimate just how much control you can have over a fellow human being information has? It's just that easy. Give me a single instance where I've made him do something so particularly 'genius'. I don't see any 'genius' or 'adapting' issue. Also, no. I never said you're hating. We are simply debating or conversing while keeping our points. There's nothing more to it unless you're trying to claim only you can express your thoughts while I can't. Buddy, that's ridiculous.
TheUrbanKing:Once again. You keep trying to defend ur point. If something likes this happened in the real world. There would be many idiots who would try to justify that it’s supernaturals. But geniuses would try to discover the science behind it rather the superstition. Wow…one day scientist discover lizards can regrow tails…wow…scientists can discover the jellyfish are immortals. It’s magic😫! No tf it ain’t. They’ll try to figure the underlying cause. That’s how people who aren’t gullible are. Especiallly COTE. Which is literally a normal world. And about my point of memories. It’s about preference. But rather the flow of the story. If mc got reincarnated as ayanokoji with no system. The only adavatge he’d have is that he knows the story. He ain’t ayanokoji l, neither does he have the memories of ayanokoji. Once something changes from canon. He’d be useless. Ingeriting memories l, even in a superficial way, allows the main characters to adapt. That’s why every…every single reincanation has mc inherit memories. Id be fine if u didn’t do it. But u try and make him this genius. Which simply does not work with the story. U keep trying justify ridiculous points simply because u can’t accept criticism. I’m not even hating on you. I even told that u have great potential and even rated this book quite high.
Well buddy! did u even read my reply. Ur just repeating the same bs. Ur in the world of COTE It isn’t a fantasy novel. If follows the real world sciences. Meaning except ur mc, everything is a semblance to this world. And make sure u read this part. Since u didn’t even bother reading properly before u became defensive When the unexplainable happens, scientists don’t resort to ‘magic’. Especially students of COTE who are all geniues. 200 years ago, learning that a jellyfish is immortal, would have made people think it’s magic. But now we’ve learnt it isnt. Especially in This age. Where we accept the thing we can’t explain means we lack information. As for the memory part. That’s even more obvious. How simple do I have to make this to get it through ur skull. If this story was only of COTE. Then if would highlight the obviousness of why it was necessary. Once he graduates. Does ur mc know who tf he is? Who’s his parents? What’s his background? How he came to this school. He doesn’t naturally meld into the story. I can just as easily create a story about a random dude who get reincarnated into a jonin ninja in Naruto. Like Yh he has the knowledge of the world, but what’s the point of it if he doesn’t inherit the knowledge the original body had. Does he know his family? His Justus? His friends? At the end he’s just a stranger in a random body. Not a Jonin. U could create a story like that. But that’s on the basis, that the mc try to relearn. But you don’t do that. Ur just put him in as though it’s natural, when it isnt Honestly it’s ridiculous that I’m arguing about this with you. And you can’t even seen ur faults.
AlmightySkyDxddy:Looks like you're refusing to accept what I'm actually telling you. I'm very grateful that you like my book enough to rate it high but I simply do not agree with what you're saying. Of course geniuses would go about their way to find the reason behind it but when the first seemingly impossible guess was confirmed there was no chance to 'scientifically' study it (and that too about a human crumbling into ash, it's incredibly funny). Manabu won't take the risk because of his sister and Nagumo has his own plans as hinted in the recent chapters (on patrëëon). And about the memories... Look I don't know why you're so hung up about it. This isn't a soul transfer story. He'll be going to different worlds in the BODY HE CURRENTLY HAS (can't use bold so I'll capitalise). Memories do not matter for a simple world he is in. Why does he need to 'adapt' in a school where probably know one knows his previous self? And what genius are you talking about? You can't be serious. He's done literally nothing special besides cleverly use the information about the characters he has to manipulate them. Do you underestimate just how much control you can have over a fellow human being information has? It's just that easy. Give me a single instance where I've made him do something so particularly 'genius'. I don't see any 'genius' or 'adapting' issue. Also, no. I never said you're hating. We are simply debating or conversing while keeping our points. There's nothing more to it unless you're trying to claim only you can express your thoughts while I can't. Buddy, that's ridiculous.
Sigh. This will be the last reply I give you, without understanding the essence of debating what point is it in further conversing with you. To you everything is simply defined as "defending" and it seems like you have some kind of dislike towards it. Is every human the same? Are they really that simple? The human species isn't a monolithic book. Your arrogance is laughable, you talk as if you deeply understand what a 'genius' is and what a 'genius' is not. Science? Do you not fail to see the contradictions in your replies? You previously said the humans in the real world might say something like this but the next para you say that Cote is a real world and not a supernatural world so his conclusion was completely baseless. I feel like faith is baseless as well and yet there are billions of people worshiping gods in the real world. COTE is no different, it is a real world, not to mention one in 2014, far less technologically advanced. Yes I read your reply but you're simply parroting a single thing again and again like it's a face. Humans are complex species, don't act as if some 'genius' should only work by your definition of a genius, one again that is laughable. The examples you use are hilarious as well. Lizards? Jellyfishes? Do you think you're making a point? I've been refraining from ad-hominem but this is just hilarious. Oh, how I wonder if Manabu with his genius will find the corpse that turned into ash? Oh wait, maybe he'll use science to inspect the space he burned, he'll probably find something in the air... right? Are you even thinking before replying or have simply clutched on to "defending"? I've finished talking about Manabu and I couldn't have made it more clear than this. Onto the memories... Like seriously? Did you not just explain yourself it's your preference? Do I even need to say anything? How does that affect the story? I simply deemed it unnecessary to give him memories. What memories does he need in a world like COTE where there isn't even anything supernatural? Not to mention he'll be an outsider in every other world he goes to in Tatsuya's body. All your claims are based on Hypothetical scenarios that have no chance of happening. You claim him not having memories of the original body has ruined the story... where exactly is that? Where exactly did it cause trouble for Tatsuya just because he doesn't have the memories? Exactly nothing. Giving him memories or not, it's a plot setting decided by the author. Whether you like it or not is a PREFERENCE. I could understand if he was in Naruto in a random character with no memories. That situation would be dangerous sure and if that were to happen then the readers can surely complain why he doesn't have the memories. But in a situation where the memories are useless or irrelevant. I don't understand why you're so bothered about it, to the point of creating Hypothetical scenarios that WON'T happen. You have not given a single reason how not having the memories of the original body has troubled the story's progression or caused the protagonist trouble. Not to mention it's funny how you completely ignored the second half of my reply. I told you to give me instances of Tatsuya being made a 'genius'. What is it? Couldn't find your so called claims of me portraying Tatsuya as a genius? Again, don't think of your personal preferences as valid criticism. Completely hilarious.
TheUrbanKing:Well buddy! did u even read my reply. Ur just repeating the same bs. Ur in the world of COTE It isn’t a fantasy novel. If follows the real world sciences. Meaning except ur mc, everything is a semblance to this world. And make sure u read this part. Since u didn’t even bother reading properly before u became defensive When the unexplainable happens, scientists don’t resort to ‘magic’. Especially students of COTE who are all geniues. 200 years ago, learning that a jellyfish is immortal, would have made people think it’s magic. But now we’ve learnt it isnt. Especially in This age. Where we accept the thing we can’t explain means we lack information. As for the memory part. That’s even more obvious. How simple do I have to make this to get it through ur skull. If this story was only of COTE. Then if would highlight the obviousness of why it was necessary. Once he graduates. Does ur mc know who tf he is? Who’s his parents? What’s his background? How he came to this school. He doesn’t naturally meld into the story. I can just as easily create a story about a random dude who get reincarnated into a jonin ninja in Naruto. Like Yh he has the knowledge of the world, but what’s the point of it if he doesn’t inherit the knowledge the original body had. Does he know his family? His Justus? His friends? At the end he’s just a stranger in a random body. Not a Jonin. U could create a story like that. But that’s on the basis, that the mc try to relearn. But you don’t do that. Ur just put him in as though it’s natural, when it isnt Honestly it’s ridiculous that I’m arguing about this with you. And you can’t even seen ur faults.
AlmightySkyDxddy:Sigh. This will be the last reply I give you, without understanding the essence of debating what point is it in further conversing with you. To you everything is simply defined as "defending" and it seems like you have some kind of dislike towards it. Is every human the same? Are they really that simple? The human species isn't a monolithic book. Your arrogance is laughable, you talk as if you deeply understand what a 'genius' is and what a 'genius' is not. Science? Do you not fail to see the contradictions in your replies? You previously said the humans in the real world might say something like this but the next para you say that Cote is a real world and not a supernatural world so his conclusion was completely baseless. I feel like faith is baseless as well and yet there are billions of people worshiping gods in the real world. COTE is no different, it is a real world, not to mention one in 2014, far less technologically advanced. Yes I read your reply but you're simply parroting a single thing again and again like it's a face. Humans are complex species, don't act as if some 'genius' should only work by your definition of a genius, one again that is laughable. The examples you use are hilarious as well. Lizards? Jellyfishes? Do you think you're making a point? I've been refraining from ad-hominem but this is just hilarious. Oh, how I wonder if Manabu with his genius will find the corpse that turned into ash? Oh wait, maybe he'll use science to inspect the space he burned, he'll probably find something in the air... right? Are you even thinking before replying or have simply clutched on to "defending"? I've finished talking about Manabu and I couldn't have made it more clear than this. Onto the memories... Like seriously? Did you not just explain yourself it's your preference? Do I even need to say anything? How does that affect the story? I simply deemed it unnecessary to give him memories. What memories does he need in a world like COTE where there isn't even anything supernatural? Not to mention he'll be an outsider in every other world he goes to in Tatsuya's body. All your claims are based on Hypothetical scenarios that have no chance of happening. You claim him not having memories of the original body has ruined the story... where exactly is that? Where exactly did it cause trouble for Tatsuya just because he doesn't have the memories? Exactly nothing. Giving him memories or not, it's a plot setting decided by the author. Whether you like it or not is a PREFERENCE. I could understand if he was in Naruto in a random character with no memories. That situation would be dangerous sure and if that were to happen then the readers can surely complain why he doesn't have the memories. But in a situation where the memories are useless or irrelevant. I don't understand why you're so bothered about it, to the point of creating Hypothetical scenarios that WON'T happen. You have not given a single reason how not having the memories of the original body has troubled the story's progression or caused the protagonist trouble. Not to mention it's funny how you completely ignored the second half of my reply. I told you to give me instances of Tatsuya being made a 'genius'. What is it? Couldn't find your so called claims of me portraying Tatsuya as a genius? Again, don't think of your personal preferences as valid criticism. Completely hilarious.
But you need to know that L also suspected supernatural involvement in Death Note. And please don't forget that Manabu is just a student although very smart in all expectations of life- nowhere near what he truly can be in future. He suspected MC based on the proofs like the timings, like how L suspected Kira....IDK man...
TheUrbanKing:Once again. You keep trying to defend ur point. If something likes this happened in the real world. There would be many idiots who would try to justify that it’s supernaturals. But geniuses would try to discover the science behind it rather the superstition. Wow…one day scientist discover lizards can regrow tails…wow…scientists can discover the jellyfish are immortals. It’s magic😫! No tf it ain’t. They’ll try to figure the underlying cause. That’s how people who aren’t gullible are. Especiallly COTE. Which is literally a normal world. And about my point of memories. It’s about preference. But rather the flow of the story. If mc got reincarnated as ayanokoji with no system. The only adavatge he’d have is that he knows the story. He ain’t ayanokoji l, neither does he have the memories of ayanokoji. Once something changes from canon. He’d be useless. Ingeriting memories l, even in a superficial way, allows the main characters to adapt. That’s why every…every single reincanation has mc inherit memories. Id be fine if u didn’t do it. But u try and make him this genius. Which simply does not work with the story. U keep trying justify ridiculous points simply because u can’t accept criticism. I’m not even hating on you. I even told that u have great potential and even rated this book quite high.
L did a tv test. Even he wasn’t sure at first. Lets not forget that it wasn’t a single happening. And Kira was very obvious on what he was doing.
MilkLover:But you need to know that L also suspected supernatural involvement in Death Note. And please don't forget that Manabu is just a student although very smart in all expectations of life- nowhere near what he truly can be in future. He suspected MC based on the proofs like the timings, like how L suspected Kira....IDK man...
AlmightySkyDxddy:Sigh. This will be the last reply I give you, without understanding the essence of debating what point is it in further conversing with you. To you everything is simply defined as "defending" and it seems like you have some kind of dislike towards it. Is every human the same? Are they really that simple? The human species isn't a monolithic book. Your arrogance is laughable, you talk as if you deeply understand what a 'genius' is and what a 'genius' is not. Science? Do you not fail to see the contradictions in your replies? You previously said the humans in the real world might say something like this but the next para you say that Cote is a real world and not a supernatural world so his conclusion was completely baseless. I feel like faith is baseless as well and yet there are billions of people worshiping gods in the real world. COTE is no different, it is a real world, not to mention one in 2014, far less technologically advanced. Yes I read your reply but you're simply parroting a single thing again and again like it's a face. Humans are complex species, don't act as if some 'genius' should only work by your definition of a genius, one again that is laughable. The examples you use are hilarious as well. Lizards? Jellyfishes? Do you think you're making a point? I've been refraining from ad-hominem but this is just hilarious. Oh, how I wonder if Manabu with his genius will find the corpse that turned into ash? Oh wait, maybe he'll use science to inspect the space he burned, he'll probably find something in the air... right? Are you even thinking before replying or have simply clutched on to "defending"? I've finished talking about Manabu and I couldn't have made it more clear than this. Onto the memories... Like seriously? Did you not just explain yourself it's your preference? Do I even need to say anything? How does that affect the story? I simply deemed it unnecessary to give him memories. What memories does he need in a world like COTE where there isn't even anything supernatural? Not to mention he'll be an outsider in every other world he goes to in Tatsuya's body. All your claims are based on Hypothetical scenarios that have no chance of happening. You claim him not having memories of the original body has ruined the story... where exactly is that? Where exactly did it cause trouble for Tatsuya just because he doesn't have the memories? Exactly nothing. Giving him memories or not, it's a plot setting decided by the author. Whether you like it or not is a PREFERENCE. I could understand if he was in Naruto in a random character with no memories. That situation would be dangerous sure and if that were to happen then the readers can surely complain why he doesn't have the memories. But in a situation where the memories are useless or irrelevant. I don't understand why you're so bothered about it, to the point of creating Hypothetical scenarios that WON'T happen. You have not given a single reason how not having the memories of the original body has troubled the story's progression or caused the protagonist trouble. Not to mention it's funny how you completely ignored the second half of my reply. I told you to give me instances of Tatsuya being made a 'genius'. What is it? Couldn't find your so called claims of me portraying Tatsuya as a genius? Again, don't think of your personal preferences as valid criticism. Completely hilarious.
Big words while saying absolutely nothing. Half the world is religious, believing in some SkyDxddy in the clouds. You're utterly hilarious if you think it's impossible to believe in "magic". It's fine though, stay in denial like the other guy. Ps. I'm Agnostic.
tentalagim:Yeah, the author is incapable of accepting that he is factually and demonstrably incorrect. In a world like ours, only the most stupid people would ever accept "it's magic" as an answer. Period. He's probably religious lol.
Big words? Factually and demonstrably are big words to you? moron. Agnostic what? Agnostic theist? Agnostic atheist? Yeah, more than half the world believes in magic. More than half the world was indoctrinated into believing in magic. In most places throughout history, you'd literally be killed for not believing in magic. "iM AgnOstIC," you don't even know what agnostic means, which tells me you probably believe that dragons and unicorns used to exist but the aliens hid them.
AlmightySkyDxddy:Big words while saying absolutely nothing. Half the world is religious, believing in some SkyDxddy in the clouds. You're utterly hilarious if you think it's impossible to believe in "magic". It's fine though, stay in denial like the other guy. Ps. I'm Agnostic.
I can tell you are slow in the head. Telling you I'm Agnostic was just to clear your stupid concept of me being religious nothing else. I have no obligation to elaborate on it. Funny how you simply ignored what I meant from "big words". You used the words without any substance. You never explained how I was "factually incorrect". Yes half the world believes in some god in the clouds, indoctrinated or not, it doesn't invalidate my point. Religion seems like a sore point to you, cry your grievances about it and debate religion elsewhere but doesn't change the fact that if a figure snapping his fingers and making the universe is believable for billions of people than Fire magic isn't all that ground breaking is it? Explain a human combusting into ash on spot in a scientific way before spouting nonsense like an illiterate.
tentalagim:Big words? Factually and demonstrably are big words to you? moron. Agnostic what? Agnostic theist? Agnostic atheist? Yeah, more than half the world believes in magic. More than half the world was indoctrinated into believing in magic. In most places throughout history, you'd literally be killed for not believing in magic. "iM AgnOstIC," you don't even know what agnostic means, which tells me you probably believe that dragons and unicorns used to exist but the aliens hid them.
Cool, agnostic doesn't mean anything unless you follow it with what you are agnostic about. If you said, "I'm very," and I was like, "very what?" your response was, "I don't need to justify myself to you, you're slow! I'm just very! dur hur dur." Saying, "I just saw something happen that I believe is impossible, therefore magic," Is never the reasonable answer. Even if it was, in fact, magic. Why not the more likely answer, "was I tricked? Stage Magicians and even some street performers can do this sort of thing", or "did I just hallucinate it?", or...... literally any other non magic answer because no magic has ever been demonstrated. Demonstrably incorrect in saying it was reasonable because I can give many more non magic answers that are more likely until investigated and exhausted.
AlmightySkyDxddy:I can tell you are slow in the head. Telling you I'm Agnostic was just to clear your stupid concept of me being religious nothing else. I have no obligation to elaborate on it. Funny how you simply ignored what I meant from "big words". You used the words without any substance. You never explained how I was "factually incorrect". Yes half the world believes in some god in the clouds, indoctrinated or not, it doesn't invalidate my point. Religion seems like a sore point to you, cry your grievances about it and debate religion elsewhere but doesn't change the fact that if a figure snapping his fingers and making the universe is believable for billions of people than Fire magic isn't all that ground breaking is it? Explain a human combusting into ash on spot in a scientific way before spouting nonsense like an illiterate.
Also, I never said it's impossible for someone to believe in magic, you stupid fxxk. The point was it has never been reasonable to say magic is the cause of anything in all of human history. The answer to why do plants grow was not magic, the answer to what is the sun, was not magic, the thunder wands wielded by European settlers against the native Americans were not magic. "bUt I dOn't kNow HoW tHunDEr waNd woRK So IS maGIc!" was not a reasonable answer. At MOST the answer would be, "I don't know how he did that, but I'm going to stay away just in case he can do it again."
AlmightySkyDxddy:I can tell you are slow in the head. Telling you I'm Agnostic was just to clear your stupid concept of me being religious nothing else. I have no obligation to elaborate on it. Funny how you simply ignored what I meant from "big words". You used the words without any substance. You never explained how I was "factually incorrect". Yes half the world believes in some god in the clouds, indoctrinated or not, it doesn't invalidate my point. Religion seems like a sore point to you, cry your grievances about it and debate religion elsewhere but doesn't change the fact that if a figure snapping his fingers and making the universe is believable for billions of people than Fire magic isn't all that ground breaking is it? Explain a human combusting into ash on spot in a scientific way before spouting nonsense like an illiterate.
One incident is not enough to label a supernatural. Imagine if this was in our world. Yh conspiracy theories would exist. But people would ultimately think it’s the government or a group doing something. COTE is literally based on reality not fantasy like Deathnote.
MilkLover:But you need to know that L also suspected supernatural involvement in Death Note. And please don't forget that Manabu is just a student although very smart in all expectations of life- nowhere near what he truly can be in future. He suspected MC based on the proofs like the timings, like how L suspected Kira....IDK man...
Also dont compare L as he’s some sort of genius.characters are only as smart as their authors. Author of death note can’t compete with real geniuses in intelligence or detective ability in our world.
MilkLover:But you need to know that L also suspected supernatural involvement in Death Note. And please don't forget that Manabu is just a student although very smart in all expectations of life- nowhere near what he truly can be in future. He suspected MC based on the proofs like the timings, like how L suspected Kira....IDK man...
yeah, but an author can creat a very smart character but it's not compelling that a very smart person can create a good story. Eddie Hall can't write a character like Goku but we compare every strong character with Goku of Saitama. I just compared L but here you are blabering about stuff like this... Does a good horror story writer must live with ghosts? or does only a good phychologist write a good phychological story?
TheUrbanKing:Also dont compare L as he’s some sort of genius.characters are only as smart as their authors. Author of death note can’t compete with real geniuses in intelligence or detective ability in our world.
MilkLover:yeah, but an author can creat a very smart character but it's not compelling that a very smart person can create a good story. Eddie Hall can't write a character like Goku but we compare every strong character with Goku of Saitama. I just compared L but here you are blabering about stuff like this... Does a good horror story writer must live with ghosts? or does only a good phychologist write a good phychological story?