Review Detail of 3aMAyatSu in THE ARCANIST LEGACY:JOURNEY INTO THE MYSTIC ART
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The action scenes are good, but try to make the paragraph shorter or seperate them to make it easier to read. Also try to make it more concise and more emotions to the story telling. a good read thus far but please consoder improving on the stuff I recommended
THE ARCANIST LEGACY:JOURNEY INTO THE MYSTIC ART
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no problem, im also trying to improve my writing by reading others, if you have time please check mine too and find its weakness
itadori_Yujiii:thanks for the feedback i will do my best !!! enjoy the reading