Review Detail of Vandalizer in [MHA: The Ice King]

I would like to thank you for the fascinating fanfic about My Hero Academia! Your unique idea fascinated me from the very beginning. However, I noticed some grammatical difficulties that might distract readers from the main story. I recommend that you pay attention to editing the text to make it even more enjoyable to read. The battle scenes could have been more detailed. Your fanfic has great potential, and improving your skills in describing battle moments could make it even more exciting. Don't forget that every writer goes through a process of improvement, and your work is certainly on the right track. I look forward to the next chapters and hope to see your talent develop!