Review Detail of HNIC409 in The Era of a Villain

I feel like I need to remind my readers and give a heads up to my future readers. 1. I have a prolog in the Volume 0. YOU MUST READ IT! If you don't read it, then there is a high chance you will not understand anything. 2. My character does not become a villian in the beginning. It is a process that you will see so it will have a good pace. 3. I was inspired to write this based on two different sayings. 1.) Villians are not born, but they are made. 2.) The difference between a villian and a hero is how they react to pain. A hero takes the pain the world throws at them and chooses to never let others feel their pain. A villian takes that pain and turns it back onto the world tenfold. 4. The MC is 16. He lost everything and has to start over. I'm a realistic person at heart, so if you expect him to just adjust automatically, then Oh well. I love fantasy because there are no limits put on it and there is no true wrong/correct way to anything. 5. I take criticism, NOT personal opinions. 6. I ask everyone to have an open mind and trust the writing process. Thanks for reading this far. Have an amazing day😁