Review Detail of Rayyer in The Cardinals Path to the Supreme
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I didn't like the story at first but there been a few Grammer errors with entire words or sentences missing that laps u in the face when you recognize them.then story development what I don't like is how the druids agency, free will and to some level respect has this ark in sense force the white savior trope on how everything and everyone is just there to worship and to be "saved" by the whites as the table talk about a savior make it so the druids entire existence to worshiping a hod not of there race and to sit by and wait for someone of another race to save them as they can't do anything them self or not worthy of saving them slef/ reaching greatness but is just a stepping stone for others
The Cardinals Path to the Supreme
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First thanks for the review...2) let me start by saying that Uriel is not white, and I am yet to introduce any heavy elements of racism within the story.3) the druids are not a stepping stone in this story and they have not been decipted in such a manner and they have their own story to play out, it is part of their belief system given to them by the Supreme one that they should help those in need, and that is why they offered their assistance to Uriel, upon seeing the signs of the prophecy they chose to uphold their beliefs. 4) the core of the system given to the druids is they worship one God, and honor the teachings of that God holding onto it even if they face difficulty, as altering the teachings given to them for their own benefit would be no different from being ingratiates to the Supreme one who favored them,it is for that reason that they strive to honor the prophecies that were given to them. 5) as mentioned in the introduction this is a story that will incorporate monotheistic ideology while being confronted with other ideologies, that is where all the tension within the druids Council comes from, with the antagonist trying to incorporate tribalism and pseudo-nationalistic ideology into a system that regects such notions, while the elders attempt to hold onto the way given to them by the Supreme one.