I read up to chapter 14 or so. so I'm not sure if it gets better, I may retry this and change my review in the future.My main issues is that it's too fast, the build times and resources gathering seems non existent. he seems to get a combat skill out of nowhere in chapter 12 without explanation. he just seems to be able to do everything and anything without weakness.My final issue is the details of the area like for example, the first village he comes across has no good description of its layout yet in a battle it seems to have walls that need seige towers to assault and a moat with only a population of 200.
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