Review Detail of SirCalamitous in Doupo: join the chat group at the beginning

yeah, this fanfic is actually a translation thou but u see that Chinese author has stop this fanfic midway.. so i am going to write it ,in my way because there is so many plot holes which I need to fix it... so I changed many thing from chapter 1 to 38 , after that I am going to start writing vol-2 ... along with if anybody ask me, hey pal are u going to follow the original which the original creator has wrote,then .....bruh hell no.